Wednesday, October 17, 2007

Second draft for Bacon's Rebellion

When you hear about Bacon’s rebellion, at first you might think about a children’s story where an army of pigs fights back against humans. This of course is quite absurd. Bacon’s Rebellion was actually about the rebellion of the people of Jamestown against the town’s government. There were four factors that contributed to the rebellion: politics, economics, race, and class. I will be focusing on the political aspect. I will discuss how politics were reflected in the rebellion itself and then how the resolution transformed Chesapeake society. Finally I will talk about how the political theme relates to my life today.

Very few know about Bacon’s Rebellion and even less about the factors that caused the rebellion. Indian raids on plantations forced colonists to call for action. The governor, William Berkeley, did nothing to solve the problem. He wanted to stay on good terms with the Indians and called for the colonists to restrain themselves. Berkeley wanted to continue being able to trade with the Indians which was why he wanted to maintain good relations. “Berkeley's policy was to preserve the friendship and loyalty of the subject Indians while assuring the settlers that they were not hostile.” (http://www.nps.gov/archive/colo/Jthanout/BacRebel.html) I would think that if Indians were attacking the people that Berkeley governed over, he would have done something about it but maybe he was just in it for is own gain. Of course, perhaps Berkeley thought that the more allies he had the better. But then again what is the point of having allies if all one’s “underlings” are dead? Luckily though, Berkeley did do something and took the Indians powder and ammunition away. He tried to set up a meeting with the chiefs but it ended with many of them being killed. If the situation was not bad enough, it was going to become worse seeing as many of the chief’s were now dead. Berkeley tried to resolve the situation but he obviously did not try hard enough.

The situation continued to decline after Nathaniel Bacon retaliated against the Indians. In his attempt to get back at the Indians, Bacon attacked the wrong Indians, which in turn caused large raids on both sides. I assume that Bacon accidentally attacked the wrong Indians because I would think that he did not want anymore Indians against him or the colonists. Usually in war, one would strive to keep away from gaining more enemies to help lessen problems. Bacon went to Berkeley to try and get a commission to lead the local forces against the Indians. Berkeley denied him many times but Bacon accused Berkeley and the rest of the government to be corrupt. In The Declaration of the People, which Bacon later wrote, he said, “For having wronged his majesties prerogative and interest, by assuming monopoly of the Beaver trade, an for having in that unjust gain betrayed and sold his Majesties Country and the lives of his loyal subjects, to the barbarous heathens.” (http://www.constitution.org/bcp/baconpeo.htm) Bacon finally had enough, surrounded the statehouse, and demanded that he get his commission or else he would shoot several of the Burgesses. Bacon I feel, was a little too drastic in his actions to get a commission. Berkeley had no choice but to give in. At a later time, all of the old Burgesses were voted out and Bacon was brought in. He was of course kicked out by Berkeley and branded a traitor. Bacon later issued The Declaration of the People. In article two it says, “For having abused and rendered contemptable the Magistrates of Justice, by advancing to places of Judicature, scandalous and ignorant favorites.” (http://www.constitution.org/bcp/baconpeo.htm) After he captured Jamestown, Bacon wanted to make his success whole. I believe he wrote the Declaration of the People to get every person in Jamestown on his side who was not already. Bacon’s mistake though was letting Berkeley go free after the capture of Jamestown. On a later date, in an act of rage, Bacon burned down Jamestown on September 19, 1676.

Not much later after Jamestown was burned, Bacon became ill and died. After Bacon’s death, Berkeley was able to regain control of the government. He hung all the major contributors of the rebellion. “All in all, twenty-three persons were hanged for their part in the rebellion.” (http://www.nps.gov/archive/colo/Jthanout/BacRebel.html) I think he did this because he disliked having his power taken away from him and then went overboard when he got his power back and I definitely do not agree with his actions. Berkeley, I feel, went way overboard with how many people he hung. Not much sooner, did an investigation committee arrive from England to look into the matter and relieved Berkeley of his position as governor. He was ordered to return to England. He died before he was able to give his report to the king about what happened. I find it ironic that Berkeley went so far to keep the power that he had and then did something foolish which lost him his power.

One would think that Bacon’s Rebellion would have transformed the society of the Chesapeake. In actuality, the resolution of the rebellion did very little or nothing to change Chesapeake society depending on how one looks at it. The only true benefit was that the Indians stopped attacking the colonists. I would say that the cease of Indian raids would be a great thing because the colonists would not have to worry as much about being attacked or killed. Politically, the Chesapeake was not transformed after the rebellion. Even though Berkeley was relieved as governor, the Tidewater aristocracy continued to maintain its power. I find it rather sad that the colonists had to trade one poorly run and at least semi corrupt government for another. Also, there was less of a need for the servant-labor system after the rebellion which was able to help stabilize the government for the long-run. “In the long run, however, the most important contribution to political stability was the declining importance of the servant-labor system.” (The American Promise Volume A: To 1800 by James Roark, Micheal Johnson, Patricia Cohen, Sarah Stage, Alan Lawson, and Susan Hartmann) How it did this though, I am not sure. Maybe it was because permanent slaves were now easier to have instead of white people who were only temporary servants. I think that in a political sense, more could have been done to change the Chesapeake but what exactly could have been done, I am not sure. As anyone can see, the resolution of Bacon’s Rebellion did very little to change Chesapeake society. The few changes that were made though generally were not for the better.

The political theme can be related to my life, today. Politics seem almost as bad today as they were back before, during, and after Bacon’s Rebellion. Our government is almost or just as corrupt as it was back in Bacon’s time. In terms of personal experience though, I am still too young to have the government affect me on a larger scale. I can though relate the theme of politics to what I know about and see in them today. Often it seems that the government raises taxes and grants favors only to give themselves more money and help themselves in any way they deem fit. They do not seem to care that regular, hard working adults do just as much work as them for only a portion of the pay. Government and political officials work just as hard as regular people so I believe that they should get no special treatment or privileges. As the government becomes more and more corrupt, society seems to get worse and worse. People seem to have no respect for the laws nor do they seem to care. The government severely punishes people who commit little crimes but let people who commit large crimes off easy. Eventually people are going to get tired of all the problems and take matter into their own hands. At least I think that is what is going to happen.

As I said before, politics do not completely affect me just yet. In my school though, the political aspect is better by far. Like the government we are a democracy. Unlike the government though, we are not corrupt. Everyone in this school works just as hard as everyone else for equal reward. This of course differs from regular school which is run like a monarchy. The teachers told us what to do and that was it. We had no say in what went on in the school. As I get older, I see that politics begin to affect me more and become a more integral part of my life. As time goes on, the government and our politics are going to get worse. I hope that things start to turn for the better. I have a strong feeling though, that things are going to get a lot worse before they get any better.

6 comments:

Kyle Leonard said...

I thought you had a very strong paper and made some good points. Your intro in my opinoin is structured and worded how i would want mine. Unfortunatly it's not.

Ashley said...

I love your introduction. It's short, but very sweet and makes the topic personal enough to make me want to read about it. You may want to consider revising your topic sentences a bit to better summarize, but otherwise the paragraphs are very well structured. You do a very good job of presenting your argument and your opinions which is excellent. You also do a good job of relating the issue to yourself, but you may want to consider editing out the final paragraph because it's not really focused to the essay.

Anonymous said...

I like the way you started out your essay, your opening sentence really caught my attention. It made me wonder who were these "pig" that fought against humans?

Dr. Herb said...

I was unclear on whether your last parapraph was your conclusion or a continuation of the point you were trying to prove in the paragraph before it. If your conclusion, I would recommend you rewrite it a little to make sure it ties back to your introduction.

Bekka said...

you know that bacons rebellion is a boring subject to write about and you try to make it intresting.

Johan said...

Right now your paper sounds like an informative paper that gives some opinion. Try to make it argumenative paper with tons of opinion that also informs. This way tour focusing on your opinions about the facts rather then the facts themselves.

re: "On a later date, in an act of rage, Bacon burned down Jamestown on September 19, 1676."
You should have one or the other in this sentance, either "on a later date" or "September 19, 1676". I would say that the better of the two would be the date, but the choice is ultimatly up to you.

re: "I think he did this because he disliked having his power taken away from him and then went overboard when he got his power back and I definitely do not agree with his actions. Berkeley, I feel, went way overboard with how many people he hung."

Too many "overboard"s in this section. Try to think of other wordings that would get the same point across without sounding repetative.

In the last body paragraph, instead of saying "The political theme can be related to my life, today.", maybe you could give an exaple of that or just word it differently so it flows better.

I think you have a lot of good points in your writing and I think you have a strong paper. Good job!